OGY – Babe gives horny old man a special Present on his 69th Birthday
Ratings
Story & Plot: 10/10 – Horny Old Man gets a visit from his young neighbour. She surprises him with a Birthday Cake for his 69th Birthday. He loves it and wants to celebrate with her. As he’s getting older, he still wants to enjoy himself, she doesn’t want him to worry about it, so decides to give him a present to remind him that going old means nothing when it comes to having fun. An old man’s cock never ages.
Acting: 7/10 – The interaction between them is nice and calm. At no point do they feel awkward acting out the scene, which allows the scene to flow naturally. There are a few things to make this better, see the What They Should Have Done section below.
Directing & Sex: 6/10 – The room setup is fine and there is a lot of light. The initial camera angle doesn’t change; the director should film the scenes a few times with different camera angles, including close-ups. The flow between areas and positions is good. She has a lovely body and her European skin tone adds to her attraction. Looking at the camera is a big no no with these scenes, especially when it has no POV elements. The part when he moves her hands for a no hands BJ was nice. Seeing a young girl bounce on an old man’s cock will always be a turn on.
What They Should Have Done
- Record the initial interaction between them from multiple angles; close-ups, over the shoulder etc
- Edit the scene together, so it comes off more presentable; use the different angles to maintain viewer attention
- Once they move areas and positions, go back and forth using a different camera angles; sticking to one continuous view can become boring.
- Add English subtitles, so more viewers can enjoy what they are saying, as words can hook viewers into the action
- When he starts feeling her up, she needs to push his hand away and look like she’s uncomfortable
- She needs to feel comfortable before she allows him touch her
- Once she’s happy, he should ask for a Birthday kiss. She will feel shy and worried but likes kissing, so she’s okay to do it.
- This leads to them making out, and he then uses his hands to feel her up
- When he’s eating her out, get in close at times and show how he’s doing it. The outer view to showcase their age difference is great, but that should not deny you opportunities to get in closer. Looking at the back of his head makes no sense.
- Make sure no one looks into the camera, as this removes the viewer from the fantasy
- During the no hands BJ, he should push in for a deep throat before she brings her hand back. Holding his cock in for a few seconds with the deep throat would have added to the viewers’ arousement; he needs to start taking control of what makes him feel good, as this also makes the viewer feel good.
