CLASSIC – NLN #12 – Scene 04 – Bath Time

Rating

Story & Plot: 10/10 – Young Daughter has bath time with Daddy, even when Mom calls to see how they are doing, but this time the Daughter isn’t sure about them in the Bath together, which is a sign she’s growing up.

Acting: 7/10 – The acting in this is better than you would find in most modern porn scenes; no cheesy lines or clear fake ness. They do well to act within the context of the scene with a normal interaction, even though it would be far from it. The conversation between them, as she notices his erection, is poorly written, leaving the director to film an interaction with no realism. There are elements, with the interaction, that should have changed during filming, so check out ‘What they should have done’ below to see how it could have been improved.

Directing & Sex: 7/10 – The filming, of them together in the Bath, was done well, as it’s not your typical scenario. The scene seemed rushed, most likely down to editing, but the director should have made the key elements more relatable.

What They Should Have Done

• The phone call from Mom was a nice touch, especially when she passes the phone over, keep this
• When she questions Bath Time these days, she needs to be more serious and stop to ask him
• The conversation, between them, as she notices his erection, was poorly written and should have been removed
• The moment before they are finished with the Bath, she turns around to hug him and let him know that he’s the best Dad she could ask for. He then says she’s the best Daughter any Father could wish for, and how proud he is that she’s growing up to be a sensible girl.
• The routine is usually that she gets out first, and then he leaves once she has gone. On this occasion, she waits for him to exit the Bath, however he insists it’s best she leaves first and that it’s always been their routine since she was an old enough to walk.
• As she isn’t going to leave, she questions why he won’t get up, at which point she expresses her sadness and that she believes he was lying about their close relationship
• He explains it’s nothing to do with her, but how it’s important she doesn’t see his penis
• She doesn’t understand and thinks he’s being silly. She doesn’t think his penis is going to change how she feels about him, as Daddy is always Daddy. Furthermore, she states that she’s always got out by herself, this time they can leave together, but she feels that she must have done something bad, and he won’t say
• Realizing how upset she is and that he doesn’t want to see her cry, he asks for his towel, so he can stand up
• She grabs the towel, he stands up, shocked at his erect penis, she turns and drops the towel. Leaving him standing there, she apologizes and bends over to pick up the towel. He sees her pussy before she hands him the towel.
• As she hands him, she says she will help him dry off. She starts patting his chest and then sees his penis again, the towel drops again, but before he can grab it, it lands on his penis and hangs there. He puts his hands to his head because he can’t believe what is happening.
• She’s amazed at how the towel didn’t fall to the floor and asks if all guys can do that
• He says no because it’s a Daddy thing, only Daddies are strong enough to do that. He attempts to wrap the towel around him, but his erection makes his penis stick out the folds.
• They both leave, but she’s so amazed she wants to go online and see more about a man’s penis
• As she checks things out online, you can see how much she’s amazed by the penis and what makes it erect
• Now she understands why Daddy was erect, the next Bath they have, she will explain that she’s happy he gets erect because it’s an expression of love, and she saw the things that people in love do
• However, she wants to do the things that show how much they love each other, at which point the phone rings before he can reply. As he talks to Mom, she turns around and starts giving him a hand job.
• He starts moving backwards to the point he has to stand up
• She keeps looking at his penis and continues with the hand job
• She goes in to lick the cock from the balls upwards
• She gets to the tip, stops and looks up at him
• As she looks at him, she puts the head of is cock in her mouth, waits a few seconds before taking more of it down her throat
• As he talks to his wife, he says, ‘Mom wants to ask you something’
• She acknowledges the questions, looks up at him with her response ‘Daddy, Mom says you need to feed me today, she’s going to be late again, and you need to think of something’. She hands the phone to him.
• As she goes back to giving him a BJ, he says ‘I’ll make sure to feed her something healthy’, and then he gives in to her
• They end with him saying that she needs her protein and feeds her his cum, and she swallows it all
• She then says she knows how much he loves her now, and that she will be the best Daughter as long as he never stops loving her.