CLASSIC – NLN#8 – Scene 03 – My Daddys A Drunk

Ratings

Story & Plot: 10/10 – Young Daughter finds Daddy drunk on the floor. So she decides she wants what Mom gets, as she should also get some, it’s a Family thing at the end of the day.

Acting: 5/10 – The acting is bad, not really doing anything for me. The concept deserves better. We needed to see her be more shocked and surprised to see Daddy drunk on the floor. I give a better version below, as a ‘what they should have done’ tip.

Directing & Sex: 7/10 – The sex fine, the issue here is the direction. We need to see her face expressions and how much she’s enjoying herself. The filming doesn’t pull you in, you’re just watching expecting to see something that’ll heat you up, but it falls short.

What they should have done is show things from her perspective; watching her Daddy walk into the house drunk, stumble around, she helps him till he falls down, so she leaves him there and calls out to her Mom. Her Mom hands her a blanket and tells her to cover him. In the middle of the night she walks up touching herself, so she goes to check on Daddy, and thinks about what it would be like to see his penis. How powerful to see the thing that gave life to her Brother & Sister. She then decides to see what such a powerful penis is like. Now this version would have been better.