CLASSIC – UCo-Ed’s #23 – Scene 03 – Piper Returns Home
Ratings
Story & Plot: 10/10 – Young Daughter heads home from University, only to find Mom isn’t there. She ends up having some quality time with Dad.
Acting: 7/10 – The interview is fine as it is showing Piper in her normal environment, being herself. She can show who she is during the interview and doesn’t need to pretend to be fake. The acting in the scene is actually okay, nothing special though. You don’t really see any cheesy moments, and they do an okay job interacting with each other. The small disconnect with reality is the moment he walks into her room and kisses her, at this point you would expect her to be shocked and express some level of discomfort.
Directing & Sex: 7/10 – The director made an issue of the camera man being so close up to the actors, which lost detail in the scene, and that style became a little annoying. The initial part of him coming onto her should have been better, as stated above. The angle of the camera pointing up as she gives him a BJ is great, it needed to be at that angle the moment he asks her to kiss him down there. The talking between them from this point onwards is good; as he explains things and expresses himself through his actions.
What They Should Have Done
- Kept the camera back so to see both actors and how they interact with each other
- When he walks into her room, she needs to be shocked
- He needs to calm her down, as she tries to understand why he came into her room
- As he calms her down, he distracts her from the situation by saying he just wants to talk and starts asking about Uni and what she got up to.
- She needs to feel uneasy with him being there, but realizes that she can relax
- He needs to mention that her friend Jenny next door was also back from Uni yesterday, and she can’t wait to see her. He then states, that he didn’t realize how grown up Jenny looked and how she spoke about all the exciting things she got up to, especially how she didn’t know that she liked older men (as she had a crush on her tutor). He then hints at the fact that he slept with her during that visit, but doesn’t make it obvious, just says ‘You should ask her to show you all the new piercings she has, you could get the same ones if you want’
- Once he states that Jenny likes older men, she needs to ask how old and if she liked younger guys as well
- There needs to be some level of emotion on her face, as he clearly shows that he wants her
- As he stands up to make her feel more comfortable, his erection slips out of the robe, which she sees.
- She is shy at first and looks away, but then questions if Jenny likes older guys because of what she just saw
- He says yes, and her curiosity makes her want to ask more questions; like what the difference is between young and older cocks, If older guys cocks become weak (silly stuff like that), and also if bigger cocks work differently to smaller ones.
- He asks if she’s seen younger cocks, which she replies ‘only on those naughty videos’, as her friend at Uni showed them to her.
- He then needs to ask her if she wants to touch it, as she’s so curious, which leads to more questions and her wanting to learn more things
- As they become intimate, he wants her to know that her pussy is his new special place
- At the moment before he’s about to cum, he slows down and tells her that he really wants to fill her up, but tonight he wants her to swallow his seeds, so she gets to experience it. He doesn’t spill any onto her face, as it’s all about making sure she gets all of it down her throat.
- He asks if she likes the taste of Daddies seeds, which she says yes, and then he states that all his seeds will only be given to her from now on
- As he looks into her eyes, he ends by saying that he will be getting her some special pills, that she needs to take tomorrow, as he wants to empty his seeds in his new special place as well
