CLASSIC – NLN#12 – Scene 02 – Mommy For An Hour

Ratings

Story & Plot: 8/10 – Mom is having a go at her Daughter about her behaviour. The Daughter, doesn’t get on with her Mom when they argue, so on this night she’s going to have a go in return, not with her words but with her body, as she decides to put on her Moms wig and pretend to be here with her Drunk Daddy.

Acting: 7/10 – The acting was better here, no real problems. The interaction between the Daughter and Mother could have been more personal, as you can imagine what an argument with your Daughter would be like. We need to see more energy, tears, and anger.

Directing & Sex: 7/10 – The age gap needs to be better, he’s a bit too young to make this work. The part where she walks into the bedroom and gets the wig is good, especially when you see him passed out on the bed, this lets you know what might happen. Very good on the direction here. The sex is okay, but could have been way better. I leave a “what they should have done” tip at the bottom; a better way to handle such a scene. In the scene itself, you feel annoyed at how she’s riding him, how she keeps looking over her shoulder and how he’s now woken up etc, it has no flow. However, I did like the part when she starts jumping on him cock, bouncing like he ain’t even there, which he does well to not move. Editing is poor.

What they should have done, is make her tip toe around trying to sneak into the bedroom and into the bed. Then she needs to be careful not to wake him, but test to see if he notices someone is around. When she realizes he doesn’t care, she then proceeds to carefully take out his penis and then do what she does best. Starting off slow, making sure she watches him while giving a blowjob. Once he’s hard, she slowly straddles him, letting him know it’s only her Mother. There should also be an accidental cream pie at the end, as she’s not going to know when he’s going to cum.